Critique My Work Please

Bedroom Render

My first render with Vray for Sketchup Pro 6
Previously i used IDX Renditioner for rendering.
Your kind thoughts please. =)

TaseerHussain wrote:Bedroom Render

My first render with Vray for Sketchup Pro 6
Previously i used IDX Renditioner for rendering.
Your kind thoughts please. =)

i dont see any image

ooh i see it you provided a link. you can actually embed it directly using the add image icon next to the link icon

since i have a tutorial with similar set up you might want to check it out.

see especially the first part \on this four parts series
http://sketchupvrayresources.blogspot.com/search/label/Basic%20Vray%20Sketchup%20Tutorial%20%20Series

nomeradona wrote:since i have a tutorial with similar set up you might want to check it out.

see especially the first part \on this four parts series
http://sketchupvrayresources.blogspot.com/search/label/Basic%20Vray%20Sketchup%20Tutorial%20%20Series

Thankyou for the link. Please be kind enough to tell me, how my work looks and what i've missed out. Would be great.

maybe you need to increase your level of illumination sir,add more artificial lights and more components.

MARM wrote:maybe you need to increase your level of illumination sir,add more artificial lights and more components.

Thankyou MARM, i will keep that in mind =)

bed looks floating, the exposure is not enough i think you need to add rectangular light. put more components. too empty. use better pillows in the future. add bump, add reflection. there so much to do. that is why you need to explore more different tutorials and readings.

nomeradona wrote:bed looks floating, the exposure is not enough i think you need to add rectangular light. put more components. too empty. use better pillows in the future. add bump, add reflection. there so much to do. that is why you need to explore more different tutorials and readings.

I just started using VRAY - i'm carefully looking through all your tutorials and i'm finding them very helpful. Thankyou and i'll keep posting my latest work from to time for your expert opinions. =)

great were looking forward with your progress.