Latest Work - Residential Home
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Re: Latest Work - Residential Home
Nice rendering bro.....
Jacobs2010- Posts : 10
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Re: Latest Work - Residential Home
This is an excellent render. I notice your attention to details; adding interior lights, grass ps, nice foreground photoshopping skills, nice wood grains texturing, edges chamferring etc.
I wanna be a picky a bit with photoshopping further those shrubs in between the fence and the plants.. sharp edges still, so you can see they were really photoshopped. darkened them also abit using burn tool. I could see that area has no direct light from the enviroment ambient light that is so coming from the right..IMho i will also do some darkening on the concrete decking and also the fence if you will be using that type of BG.
As for the Vray camera, you might consider realigning your verticals with the verticality of the picture plane. there is something in the vray camera, (like lens shift in VRAY MAx) to correct this... I dont have an access with my vray at the moment so i cant say exactly the correct VFSU term...
I wanna be a picky a bit with photoshopping further those shrubs in between the fence and the plants.. sharp edges still, so you can see they were really photoshopped. darkened them also abit using burn tool. I could see that area has no direct light from the enviroment ambient light that is so coming from the right..IMho i will also do some darkening on the concrete decking and also the fence if you will be using that type of BG.
As for the Vray camera, you might consider realigning your verticals with the verticality of the picture plane. there is something in the vray camera, (like lens shift in VRAY MAx) to correct this... I dont have an access with my vray at the moment so i cant say exactly the correct VFSU term...
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Re: Latest Work - Residential Home
this is an excellent render.. .
but if may add.. .the bush in the foreground seems a lot bigger than the house.. .the way i see it.. .the bush tends to over shadow the house.. .imho.. . :-D
but if may add.. .the bush in the foreground seems a lot bigger than the house.. .the way i see it.. .the bush tends to over shadow the house.. .imho.. . :-D
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