simple exterior render
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Re: simple exterior render
Thank you for sharing this image.. I must say your setting and contrast were excellent. The sharpness and the use of material texture you nailed it. THe lighting is also great especially the effect of wall lamp on the exterior. I especially like those in the garage area. The photoshopped grass also is much better and I could not see a photoshop flaw. Many times i prefer this done choking my computer with displacement and even using fur...
However you should consider looking on the following:
- i can see antialising problem even with the bigger size output. look at your image sampler and increase it a bit.
- plants, i could see some halo on the leaves of the plants, if they are in png, tick the color transparency something ( i forgot the exact word) if they are jpg then you need to rework the texture in photoshop.
- sky.. the light of the background image that you use is coming from the left. the model lighting seems coming from the right. maybe reverse or mirror the bg image.
- model needs to be filleted or chamfered, edges are too sharp. use the round corner of fredo02 to do the magic.
- finally for the interior, if you are using lighting maybe add some furniture or if seem that is too much maybe add curtains...
However you should consider looking on the following:
- i can see antialising problem even with the bigger size output. look at your image sampler and increase it a bit.
- plants, i could see some halo on the leaves of the plants, if they are in png, tick the color transparency something ( i forgot the exact word) if they are jpg then you need to rework the texture in photoshop.
- sky.. the light of the background image that you use is coming from the left. the model lighting seems coming from the right. maybe reverse or mirror the bg image.
- model needs to be filleted or chamfered, edges are too sharp. use the round corner of fredo02 to do the magic.
- finally for the interior, if you are using lighting maybe add some furniture or if seem that is too much maybe add curtains...
nomeradona- Forum Moderator
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Re: simple exterior render
Thanks very much for the critique Noma - im excited that im doing ok with it
Appreciated
I will look at the points you made and upload the new render when i get some time...
once again, thanks.
Appreciated
I will look at the points you made and upload the new render when i get some time...
once again, thanks.
scostumatu- Posts : 11
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Re: simple exterior render
sure looking forward with the updated render..btw Noma is the name of my sister.
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